Smells like teen angst.
Not only do you start it off on a clap rather than a beat, but the general mixing and mastering is bad. At least there's no clipping.
Stop voting five on your own music just to make yourself feel better.
Gee, amazingly complex. (no)
All this is, is a four to the floor beat(which is bad in itself already) loop with audio squeals thrown in at bad intervals.
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